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My new Alicorn OC Pinkie Wing by LR-Studios My new Alicorn OC Pinkie Wing by LR-Studios
My new Alicorn OC I adopted from :iconkatnissrulez123:~Katnissrulez123 [link]
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Name: Pinkie Wing

Age: 18

Personalities: charming, honest, friendly, and a bit aggressive
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AGirlWhoLikesArt Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I don't see how "no negative criticism" is gonna stick, since this IS an art site with a base for criticizing. 

I'll be constructive, which ISN'T negative.

COLOR- 4/10
I'll address the base color first. The pink is too saturated. maybe dim it a bit. The mane might be able to stick if the base changes. The eye color also seems to be a bit too similar to the current base as well. The eye color could use tweaking, but it's pass-able as is.

OTHER AESTHETICS- 3/10
I'm gonna bring up the elephant in the room. It's an alicorn. How often do we see an alicorn in the show? (excusing the fact there are backgrounds, which could easily be errors.) I am rather against alicorns, for the simple reason, that usually they don't have a reason. Let's examine the 4 we have.

Celestia: She is a very powerful pony. Her cutie mark is the sun itself, and she has domain over it, and used to substitute Luna's spot over the moon.
Luna: As mentioned, Luna is in control of the moon. She has it as her cutie mark.
Cadence: While she appeared randomly, she is now the guardian of the Crystal Heart and the Crystal Empire.
Twilight: She is the element of Magic, a very important protector of the MLP world (NOTE: I have NOT seen S5.)

So what is this pony in charge of? What major thing does she offer to help the world?

And what in the world would her cutie mark be with a name like "Pinkie Wing"?

THE NAME- 0/10
Okay, what in the hay kind of name IS Pinkie Wing? I do have an issue with the mane cast's names (or parts) being in an OC name. And Wing? Zero originality in my opinion.

THE PERSONALITY- 2.5/10
The one thing that can redeem even the worst designed OC (not to say yours is that, I've seen the bottom of the barrel.)

It's borderline Mary Sue. I'm going to address EVERY trait (only 4, shouldn't take too long)
Charming- Okay, first trait and I think of Princess Charming. Is this sometimes in public, or is it an "all the time" thing?
Honest- 100%? Is she 100% honest? Or just generally an honest pony? Is it a kind honesty or a blunt/sarcastic honesty?
Friendly- This is one trait I can pass. It's a trait most ponies in the show or background have, and to not have it is rare.
A little aggressive- ... I feel the non-explanation radiating off of this one. It's a very un-explained way of making a character a little bit more human. A little aggressive? How aggressive is a little? Is it random? Is it triggered?

BACKSTORY-N/A
There is none, so it doesn't justify the traits. I'm not gonna rate this, as it's non existent. Not good, nor bad.

OVERALL- 1.5/10
I generally don't like this OC. I have no qualms in saying this statement. There are redeemable qualities, but nothing to drag your rating out of the dirt.
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LadyDaliena Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015

Sorry but the ''no negative coments and no negative criticism'' is just laughable. Life is not made of sugar and cristicism (negative and positive) is needed if you want to get better.

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xOMGALICORNx Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
why do mary sues get all the love?
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TheTrueWerepyre Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome, :iconkatnissrulez123: is my sister :P
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Cortytehfluffeh Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student General Artist
D'aw she's cute
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moonwing-115 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
It looks like s nice OC, will she have a back story?
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Katnissrulez123 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OMG! U ARE AWESOME AT MAKING PONIES!
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WeasleyWoman Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It was adopted...
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Katnissrulez123 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yes.
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GreenDayPrinceness19 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
She looks cute Bro :D
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BloodRedStrider Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool OC
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BloodRedStrider Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DONT CLICK IT'S A SPAM
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xXLone-FallingStarXx Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Oh no! new friend, don't click on it!
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